What should we change?
(General comment on draft standard)
What should we change it to?
(General comment on draft standard)
Why should we change it?
I appreciate the opportunity to submit comments on this draft standard and extend my congratulations to the entire team for developing this draft. I support the development of a standard for emergency egress of people with disabilities, and all of my comments should be interpreted with this support in mind.
I do have some big-picture concerns with this draft standard in its current form, and have noted some big-picture suggestions to help make the standard easier to implement and for others to comply with:
1) APPLICATION: The described application is all federally-regulated buildings, but the content seems to be more focused on office towers. Federal occupancies are broader, and include mercantile spaces with transient visitors (e.g., banks), detention centres, and other spaces where the proposed requirements do not apply cleanly (e.g., proposal for a visitor to fill in a PEEP every single time they enter a building, which is impractical for 1-storey mercantile spaces). I suggest limiting the application of the draft standard to the spaces that it was developed for, and perhaps consider other spaces in future editions.
2) CLARITY IN INTENT: In many places, I have suggested clarifying the intent of specific provisions - requirements are present but it's not clear to a reader why they are there and who they serve. Providing clarification will make it easier for a reader to comply with the standard in spirit if they cannot comply to the letter, and ultimately serve the needs of people with disabilities.
3) TYPES OF EMERGENCIES: The draft standard would benefit from focus in the emergency it is addressing. Many of the provisions focus on fire emergencies, though the scope seems to be defined for all emergencies. Consider limiting the scope to the context that the provisions are designed for: fire emergencies. Other types of emergencies can be addressed more thoroughly in future editions.
4) REFERENCES TO OTHER DOCUMENTS: The draft standard (appropriately) refers to other documents (e.g., CSA B651), and in several places makes a generic statement to the effect of "comply with relevant provisions in CSA B651". Don't make the reader guess on the intent of the technical committee; refer to specific provisions that the technical committee feels are relevant and necessary. This will increase the likelihood of a reader complying, and also help officials with enforcement if there are longer-term goals of bringing this into legislation.
5) INTERNAL CONSISTENCY AND COMPATIBILITY OF TECHNICAL REQUIREMENTS: In several places I have pointed out where parts of the standard aren't consistent with each other (e.g. who is responsible for the buddy system), or where requirements cannot be complied with simultaneously (e.g., protrusion bans need to be reconciled with requirements for power door operators and other protruding safety features). I would encourage the technical committee to include more illustrations to help show (and confirm to yourselves) how requirements would exist all together in practice, as well as test-drive some of the proposed procedures to help flag consistency issues. This is the responsibility of the technical committee - it shouldn't be left to public review comments to flag major internal discrepancies.
6) CLARITY AND PUBLIC READINESS OF THE DOCUMENT: I found this draft to be extremely difficult to read, as well as to understand and comment on. It is much longer than it needs to be because several provisions are repeated unnecessarily (which also probably made it more difficult for the committee to identify internal inconsistencies). The document should undergo editing before it goes to any subsequent public reviews. Similarly, numbering clauses and having some kind of hierarchy to the provisions will help with making the standard easier to read and understand, and also make it easier for individual provisions to be cross-referenced - thus reducing some of the repetition. Images will help a reader understand the intent of the committee and thus help with compliance.
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